hi Tipene its ELLIE i like how you put ticks if you have got it but there were a few word spelled wrong like plan your spelt it like paln ad also pants you spelt it paths
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hi Tipene
ReplyDeleteits ELLIE i like how you put ticks if you have got it
but there were a few word spelled wrong like plan your spelt it like paln ad also pants you spelt it paths
i liked it but I agree with Ellie you did spell some words wrong keep up the good work.
ReplyDeletei didnt write it it was mark
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